Showing posts with label tips. Show all posts
Showing posts with label tips. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Guest Post by Sandra Miller: Make the self-editing process easier through 8 tips

Everyone, welcome Sandra Miller, a freelance writer, to Ensconced in YA! I think these are great tips that will help any writer.

If you are a writer who skips the self-editing process, you should know that editing is the key factor that separates good writers from mediocre ones. If you are writing for a publishing house or a magazine, you certainly have a professional editor to do this job for you, but if you are an aspiring writer and you’re working all by yourself, then you will need to do the editing on your own. 

Editing other people’s work is a challenge; editing your own writing goes beyond your imagination of hard work. However, our simple tips will help you go through the process more easily and successfully. 

1. Just write first. Editing comes later.
The most important thing to remember is to finish your writing before you start editing it. If you stop to edit while you are writing, you will never finish the piece. You can make a break and correct a typo you noticed in the previous sentence, and it is fine to restart a sentence when you know it doesn’t sound well. However, you mustn’t keep making one step forward and two steps back. If writing without editing is a real struggle for you, you should try using Write or Die by Dr Wicked – an application that will force you to continue writing by punishing you every time you become distracted. 

2. Step away from your work
It is very important to let your work sit and step away from it before you start with the self-editing process. If you are a blogger, you can give a few hours or a day for the short piece to sit. However, if you have just finished writing an entire novel, you need to put it aside for a week or two and, if possible, stop thinking about it. This will allow you to have a fresh impression when you come back to the writing. You will easily spot the parts that don’t fit, as well as the inconsistent characterization and minor holes in the plot.   

3. Change the format
If you turn your words into another format, you will spot the mistakes or problems more easily. Printing out a blog post or transferring your novel onto an e-reader will let you see your work with a reader’s eyes. If you only take a look at your writing in its published form, everything will become clearer and easier to fix. 

4. Start with the content and structure
One of the worst self-editing mistakes you could make is starting by polishing up each sentence, every phrase and word, and cut out the unnecessary parts of the material later. Editing the big picture first is much more efficient. You should start by cutting out unnecessary sections or chapters, adding the missing information and revising the sections or scenes that require radical improvements. You can start digging down into the individual words and sentences after that. 

5. Lower the word count by 10%
It’s no secret that writers tend to over-write. This is why it’s important that you cut out 10% of the word count once you are happy with the big picture. Unnecessary words only weaken the story and your argument, which is why you need to get rid of them. If you find that the same point has been repeated several times throughout the piece – it’s probably unnecessary and your reader would be annoyed by the repetitiveness. Cut out all unnecessary adjectives and wishy-washy phrases and you’ll end up having a much cleaner piece that will be easier to read. 

6. The spell check is great, but it’s not all-mighty
You should never forget to run your work through a spelling and grammar checker. However, you should not rely on this tool completely because it can’t catch every mistake. For example, homophones often go through this process unnoticed, but your readers will surely notice them. You need to use your eyes too. 

7. Read the piece backwards
This is a strange technique, but it makes the tough self-editing process easier. It is a trick that will help you notice the small mistakes that were sliding past you. If you’re not used to this way of proofreading, you can read the piece really slowly. This can be done by increasing the font size, which will prevent you from seeing too many words on your screen at a time. 

8. Know when you are finished
When you start editing and perfecting your own work, you could fall into a never-ending cycle of rewriting some parts and then changing them back. You should know when you are done and stop the process at some point. You cannot achieve perfection, so remember that a published piece is always better than a manuscript that sits on your computer forever.     

Sandra Miller is freelance short story author and graduate of Literature from the NYU, where she wrote for the students journal and tutored students in writing. She recommends authors use professional editing services Help.Plagtracker. Now she is writing her first YA novel.

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

UPDATES (more entries to Requiem/$15 Amazon GC Giveaway) and Insider Tips for Bloggers: How to host a terrific giveaway and gain followers

Just a couple of updates:
The Stereotypical Freaks, the graphic novel, that I loved so much is up for the Next Read in The Graphic Novel Reading Group this month! So, if you could join the group and then vote in the book of the month poll for "Freaks" that would be AWESOME! 
To sweeten the deal, you get +5 entries in the current Requiem/$15 Amazon GC giveaway if you do this... this option is only open until April 14th so get your extra entries!!!

So here are the links:



OK on to our topic of discussion...
I'll be blunt. Hosting a giveaway is the best way to earn followers. If you have a blog that has something to say on top of that, you can gain loyal followers.

So how do you host the perfect giveaway that gets everyone jumping through every hoop you present just to get a chance to win?

I. The one most important thing is to have a great prize. So how do you do that? Easy.

1. It has to be something that people want.
-A signed copy of a book (especially books that are more popularly known)
-Signed swag (such as bookplates or bookmarks)
-Amazon gift cards (of any denomination because people can use this to buy a variety of things)

For indie writers, it's that much more important to give out physical signed books (many people still don't have e-readers).  In addition I suggest either:
-Amazon gift card (obviously the higher the monetary amount, the better. $10 is usually the lowest I would go)
-Another popular book in the same genre. For example, if your book is a YA contemporary, giving away a bestselling book in that genre at the same time increases interest. If it's SIGNED, that always ups the ante.

2. What about e-books?
Sure. But just remember people will go for physical copies more than e-books so you will always get a lower response.

II. Shipping. Always go international if you can. There are a lot of people who can't get books abroad, but they want to read your book. So give them a way they can. If shipping is too much, there are other ways to make your giveaway international without adding too much cost.
- Give away a physical signed copy only US, and e-copies INT
- Give away signed swag international (usually can mail in just an envelope)
- Give away a book you can send via Book Depository, which ships internationally for free.

III. Use Rafflecopter or some other mechanism to easily get people to enter. If it's too difficult, people won't jump through your hoops.

IV. Join a giveaway blog hop! I Am A Reader, Not a Writer hosts multiple ones every month and they are heavily publicized. You'll get a great response usually if your prize is good.

V. What hoops?
-You want to utilize this giveaway to do two things successfully:
1. Promote an author.
2. Promote yourself.

It's always in this order. You want to please the person you are helping out, but also reap some benefits yourself. Add your twitter, facebook, blog, Amazon reviews, etc. For the author, I always include their twitter, blog, facebook, goodreads Fan page, and adding their book to your Goodreads TBR list.

VI. Promote, promote, promote. If no one knows about your giveaway, no one will enter it. Promote it on facebook, twitter, Goodreads, Librarything, Got Great Giveaways on I Am a Reader, Not a Writer, any place with an open forum.

Now put up a great giveaway and have fun!

Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Insider Tips: How to get Free or Cheap Books

Grand opening of a new tab on my blog! I figured I've learned a lot in the almost year of blogging and wanted to share some of these great tips with my loyal readers. So this is the first post of this type. It'll usually be on Tuesdays, just like Curmudgeon's Corner is on alternating Thursdays.

For those of you who have been following me, you know that the initial reason I got into this whole business is to get free books. I loved reading, but I was realizing that I was spending outrageous amounts of money per month on books. So I decided to find ways to make this more affordable, and wanted to share these tips with all of my loyal readers!

1. Go to a library.
I know this sounds trite, but if you have the time and ability to get there, this is a great way of getting lots of books and not having to keep them if they're terrible. Plus, now with the event of e-readers, many libraries have ways that you can download copies for a short period of time for free. That said, there can be waiting lines for some of the more popular books.

2. Write reviews.
This is how I got started. There are several websites that promote free books that will be either sent directly to you via email OR shipped to your house free of charge if you agree to write a review. Some websites that have been very consistent and high rates of getting books:

I. Librarything.com - There are several ways to get books on this site.

A. The first is through the Early Reviewers program. I highly recommend this program, as you can get big upcoming books for free from the publisher in exchange for a review, and you don't have to own a blog or anything. You sign up for the books that sound interesting each month, and you pretty consistently get books every other month. Make sure to write a review though because it counts against you if you don't and you will be less likely to get a book in the future.

B. Member giveaways- this is another aspect of librarything.com where members post their own giveaways. You don't get penalized for not writing a review, but you are more likely to get more books if you do so. This is a hit or miss place-- you get a lot of books, but they aren't usually that good. I spent a large amount of time here initially just because of the volume of the books I would receive, but I admit I don't really use it any more.

C. Sign up for a group for Freebies on Librarything. There is a link to join groups, and there are some that promote free giveaways on a variety of different websites.

II. Goodreads

A. First Reads. Goodreads hosts giveaways on a regular basis from books that are just coming out in their First Reads program. You can sign up for as many as you want and the rate of return is not too bad-- I generally get a book every few months. These also tend to be better quality books.

B. Goodreads Groups. There are a variety of Giveaway book groups, and if you join those and visit them regularly, you'll be alerted to several giveaways. The more groups you sign up for, the more likely you will find good giveaways. Also, sign up for groups in the genre you are interested in. There are usually sections where people list freebies and giveaways in.

III. Amazon

A. Vine Program: I don't know a lot about this, since it's rather a secretive group of people who review. Amazon says that if you have a lot of people who like your reviews, your chances increase to get into the program, as it is still invite only. I think this is a bit of hogwash, as I've seen people in the Vine program who are ranked in the 10,000 range, and I'm ranked close to 500 and still am not in the program. So I think it's a bit random. But if you are lucky enough to get into this program, you'll have your selection of books about to come out and will be able to post your review for these books earlier than other reviewers, which is a nice bonus.

IV. Netgalley

A website where you can download free e-copies of books yet to be published-- your odds are better if you have a blog, but if you write reviews, you can still get books.

3. Visit blogs who regularly host giveaways.
The best way to get new members and interest to your blog is to host giveaways. I usually host a giveaway every week to every other week. There are other blogs that host giveaway hops, which are a very popular way of getting both a lot of attention for individual blogs AND letting people sign up for many giveaways at once, increasing the odds of winning a book. The best place to find the best giveaway blog hops is at the wonderful blog, I Am a Reader, Not a Writer Blog.

4. Amazon Free Books
There are tons of free books on Amazon, especially the "classics," which is nice to get a copy for your kindle on books that you loved.

5. Amazon Daily Kindle Deals
This is a terrific way to get a book you've been wanting to read at a highly discounted price. The new YA books usually run around $10, and if you sign up for Daily Kindle Deals, you can many times find a book for $2-3. 

Hope this helps you guys find some great free and cheap books! If you have any other tips, please comment and I'll add it to the post and check it out myself!